Friday, October 07, 2005

"empty office" (mini-sonnet 3)

Strange the night
    grows late while
        just a little

    here in
        solitude of an
            empty office


passing the
    idle while
        typing letters that

    appear
        undaunted
            black on white


or whie on
    black . . .
        words to recite

    or whisper
        back to the
            empty (as it's


blithely tokened)
    lingering
        air

1 Comments:

Blogger david raphael israel said...

This poem is (I now observe, after having written it sans thought of this specifically) "designed to be read aloud in one breath." But if a 2nd is to be taken, that can best be done at the elipsis.
(A mild "helpful authorial suggestion" this? -- more than I daresay proposed as a strict desideratum.)

Fri Oct 07, 03:58:00 AM PDT  

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