Gary's haiku

Life spilling symbols

running across blackened fields

settle artfully

[might add a bit to this later -- am running out the door shortly. I'd pointed a friend to this blog; he did me the kindness of sending the above by way of overall response. I like how the poem addresses the blog gestalt overall -- as immediate visual/mental experience.] A responsive ku:

only a brief span

seven syllables at most

each lifetime so quick!