"O sparrow" (micro-sonnet 2)
Listen a little
O sparrow
you who
yersterday
spake as
sparrows
always speak
listen a bit
with me
as I'm now
listening
O sparrow
you who
yersterday
spake as
sparrows
always speak
listen a bit
with me
as I'm now
listening
posted by david raphael israel at 11:14 PM
2 Comments:
sigh.
D.i, a thing I shouldve warned you about. Spam commentors are the latest evil.
Get to the blogger home page, and turn on word verification. It also exists under the comments tab.. can turn it on there too.
Sweet verse this.
No ones spoken of listening and sparrows in a very long time.
Karandash-suena [pencil-dreamie, if hap to be Russio-Spanish]--
well the poem of course can be deemed bara arrogant (*the guy thinks he can teach a thing like that to sparrows?*); but I'll leave aside this as beside the point.
Yes I've noted the gnat-ish absurdity of insta-spam entries; but (so far) I find they only leap into the breach when I've first placed a new blog-post. I'd just assume hand-weed the patch (swearing off pesticide for now): I prefer not putting me wee readers thru w-verif hassle (for present). But thanks, & for the (human-generated) comment.
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