"recondite" (mini-sonnet)
Every night
the world again
turns dark
and only
you behind
the world
resting in an
ungloomled
redoubt one
hardly knows
to picture --
much too
recondite
for thought (so
smart about
our places &
geographies) --
you remain
they say right
where
you are
/ / / / / / / / / /
[There, now I've shown one "micro-sonnet" and one "mini-sonnet." This could suffice, though perhaps it'll prove meet to repeat these forms some bit -- to give a fuller sense of their particular uses.]
the world again
turns dark
and only
you behind
the world
resting in an
ungloomled
redoubt one
hardly knows
to picture --
much too
recondite
for thought (so
smart about
our places &
geographies) --
you remain
they say right
where
you are
/ / / / / / / / / /
[There, now I've shown one "micro-sonnet" and one "mini-sonnet." This could suffice, though perhaps it'll prove meet to repeat these forms some bit -- to give a fuller sense of their particular uses.]
posted by david raphael israel at 9:50 PM
2 Comments:
likum this. Need to read your older posts for form-speak...
who said, that why go into the woods and deep jungle seeking the truth..
that while you were out, the elephant is at home quietly sleeping?
that.
I like it. Much peace you bring at night.
mmm -- likum the elephant saying;
not too sure I'd heard it either.
gracia, d.i.
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