tri-ku 12 : percussive
No one's a stranger
even one's own heart's unknown
all are strangers here
estrangement as
transcient effect
in a music
percussive
silent passage
whispery
even one's own heart's unknown
all are strangers here
estrangement as
transcient effect
in a music
percussive
silent passage
whispery
posted by david raphael israel at 4:51 AM
2 Comments:
Oh, the funnel-ku has become a tri-ku overnight. Things do change quickly around these parts.
I like the sounds in the final verse. Very interesting alliteration.
Yes, I decided "funnel haiku" had way too many syllables! ("Ku" does simply mean verse or poem; haiku is a more specific kind; "tri-ku" is polyglot.)
The notion of percussion as always involving silence (which gives it definition; ditto for utterance); and the "strange" of estrangement involving (fundamentally) change (hence transcience) -- these are things in mind & at play here.
cheers, d.i.
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