"Carved & shaped" [sonnet]
Carved & shaped
or quarried & moved
chipped & scraped
or polished & buffed
what we are
grows finely grooved
this the artist
first out-roughed
then returned with tinkling files
prodding sanding blowing breath
in our sheen he sees his smiles
while his little knives marked death
birth pain growth-confusion
finely edge the stony mass
often a wash of warm illusion
lets the sediment lift & pass
from this workshop who egresses?
few are finished! patience blesses
This is responsive to two sonnets I read this morning on a group blog: Jyostna's A Sonnet-Untitled, and Deemikay's Stone sonnet.
or quarried & moved
chipped & scraped
or polished & buffed
what we are
grows finely grooved
this the artist
first out-roughed
then returned with tinkling files
prodding sanding blowing breath
in our sheen he sees his smiles
while his little knives marked death
birth pain growth-confusion
finely edge the stony mass
often a wash of warm illusion
lets the sediment lift & pass
from this workshop who egresses?
few are finished! patience blesses
This is responsive to two sonnets I read this morning on a group blog: Jyostna's A Sonnet-Untitled, and Deemikay's Stone sonnet.
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