Bittersweetly [rubai]
Does the saddest feeling require the sweetest rhyme?
ever bittersweetly swings the scythe of time
and if speech were far more gestural than semantic?
we would parse its face & intuit its mute pantomime
[I would dub this "a gnomic verse".]
ever bittersweetly swings the scythe of time
and if speech were far more gestural than semantic?
we would parse its face & intuit its mute pantomime
[I would dub this "a gnomic verse".]
posted by david raphael israel at 10:16 PM
2 Comments:
thanks S --
was just now revising this!
-- I've changed it several times, but think it's finally settled.
... thought provoking.
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