Tuesday, February 14, 2006

"A little match"         [rubai]


This is among the days of

my yearning for you

this is pulled by the waves of

my churning for you

can't a little match ignite

a mighty forest?

this may hint at the blaze of

my burning for you


6 Comments:

Blogger Batul said...

David, A very, very impressive blog. Look forward to reading it. Yes, I will try and create a blog with all the intricacies and experiences of making a film. Have just got back my computer from the clutches of my editor. Regards, Batul

Tue Feb 14, 10:42:00 PM PST  
Blogger Indeterminacy said...

Short, sweet and extremely succint. Wonderful!

Wed Feb 15, 04:19:00 AM PST  
Blogger Phoenix said...

lovely!

Wed Feb 15, 05:13:00 AM PST  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Ref : Your comment in my blog
Thinking about attire & its absence :
To wear or not to,in this life or next,
To bear or not to,the constant quest.
Ever the conformist,will toe the line...
But,what rule to follow ? Their's or mine?

Thank you so much for stopping by and sparing thoughts...Just yesterday joined Caferati, and something tells me this is going to be..well..interesting shall we say:)
Sruthi
http://srusrid.livejournal.com/

ps: I posted the same in your ryze page, but wasn't sure whether you check it..so...

Wed Feb 15, 09:18:00 AM PST  
Blogger david raphael israel said...

Thanks all for notes & comments.

The rubai form continues to interest me . . .

Fri Feb 17, 02:25:00 PM PST  
Blogger shikha said...

something very simple...expressed beautifully....

i haven't come across a better blog!

Mon Feb 27, 06:19:00 AM PST  

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