Sunday, February 05, 2006

to Basant [springtime]       [5-7-5 not-haiku]


some say you're coming
should I credit such reports?
news travels slow here

I remember you
you were the one who promised
kisses every day

your energy was
embarassingly profuse
someone kicked you out

now I hear you want
to stage a return drama
you & your flowers


1 Comments:

Blogger ~River~ said...

I like this one too. The first and final stanzas, wryly brilliant.

Wed Feb 08, 06:56:00 AM PST  

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