"winter's chill" [rubai]


to my heart
winter's chill I discern
in my heart
do my eyes perceive no
rosey flame?
bulbuls will again burn
in my heart
This pleasantry is partially modeled on, and could be deemed (rhetorically) a "reply to" Rupa's first try at composing a rubai
1 Comments:
nice one... but i feel that thelast line does not gel with the 1st three lines.
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