Tuesday, April 04, 2006

"Frazzle"           [rubai / gatha]

If I should accomplish my aims     what then my beloved?

if weary I grow of your games     what then my beloved?

the story moves on     while the plotlines continue to frazzle

if the figures jump out of the frames     what then my beloved?

3 Comments:

Blogger ~Nitoo Das~ said...

This sounds like a threat! ~:-O

Wed Apr 05, 11:33:00 PM PDT  
Blogger david raphael israel said...

Well there are several possible readings I dare say!

Visually, I had in mind the way that, as a convention of miniaturist art, the Persian artists (and their Indian heirs) inevitably drew ornate borders around the scene being depicted, and then had some or another element breach the border -- venture somewhat beyond the edge of the (artificial) frame that defines the given space for the scene. It is a playful convention but also one with philosophical resonances (regarding the nature of narrative -- which, in a broader sense, involves such things as the nature of "life").

The "frames" (in the line of the poem) might be analogous to frames of film, frames of a cartoon novel, frames of the miniaturist's art....

All that said, it's true there's a hint of the suicidal in the verse, no doubt. Ideally, ego-layers get unpeeled amidst life -- as a more rarefied mode of "frame-jumping."

Thu Apr 06, 07:11:00 AM PDT  
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Fri May 19, 11:53:00 AM PDT  

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