Tuesday, June 06, 2006

journey without words     [nearly rhymeless shi]

[for Akira Yamashita]


I was walking a street of silence
whistling a tune of emptiness
the bus was burning nothingness
the carburetor mixed air with air
the passengers were seated or
standing grasping metal bars
thinking no thoughts at all
late in evening going nowhere


2 Comments:

Blogger Batul said...

I like the image of the empty bus going nowhere, for Akira. One typo error - check "grasping".

Mon Jun 05, 09:20:00 PM PDT  
Blogger david raphael israel said...

thanks Batul . . .

Tue Jun 06, 09:19:00 PM PDT  

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