"Winter marvels" [rubai]
Winter marvels yet appear
in the world
gelid wonders ever dear
in the world
utter whiteness spread atop
each dark twig
every eye must shed a tear
in the world
[first serious snow of the season, finally]
posted by david raphael israel at 6:00 PM
4 Comments:
rubai/ghazal/buzzle/duzzle/sonnet/bonnet/sms poem - who cares to classify and toxify?
For this man is a visual poet and should not be required to adhere to some norm devised by someone.
When the time comes when we are able to create three dimensional poetry on the net, this man will truly achieve his potential. AT this time, he struggles.
VM @ Bgl
Snow in February?! Some days back, weren't you welcoming the spring? :)
Dottore Murthy,
you are right at least with your final sentence there. grazie
River,
ah -- but I was mainly musing on spring as a future possibility, as in this:
some say you're coming
should I credit such reports?
news travels slow here
/ / /
& it's interrupted by snow here
cheers, d.i.
however, today it's spring-like & warm!
(DC is a city noted for its ever-changeful weather conditions)
d.i.
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